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Author Topic: Is this Love or another Pain?? (TMNT FF LS)  (Read 487 times)
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Leanarda
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« on: June 21, 2009, 04:01:06 AM »

I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS FROM TMNT. THEY ALL BELONG TO THEIR RIGHT FULL OWNER.

The rain poors down on this lonely city, this quiet city. Here in Ireland close to shore but not that close. The clouds rumble and flash and the sea thrashes against her victoms. A lone girl in a dark cloak with a hood stands there. She yells at the sky and kicks at the earth. She becomes calm very quikely and walks away to a grave.

"You are the greastest friend I could ever ask. I'm so sorry that I let you die. I will go and train to become stronger to protect those I love. Goodybye my friend. Goodbye Nick." She cryed at visting her friend. Then quikely runs off. Crying/Very Sad

She ran all the way to the airport and hide in the cargo section to New York City. She whisper a good bye to her homeland. It wasn't long till the plane had landed, so she quikely got out and went for the sewers. She heard the rain from above and remember that day. She closed her eyes and ran into a direction not paying any atention to the red beams for sercurity. The silent alrams went off in a certent home. They followed her to the rooftops to where its was pooring cats and dogs. They finally caught up to her.

"Wait! Please don't jump!" One with a blue masked called.
"Why!?! I don't deserve to live!" She yelled at them. She stood on the ledge, ready to jump.
"Yes you do!" The red masked turtle yelled. She turn to them and jump.
"Gotcha!" The orange masked turtle yelled. He pulled her up on to the roof.

The all gasp. Surprised They all whisper and then carry her to their home. There they cared for her untill she woke up. It was't till the very next morning when she awoke.

"Huh? Where am I?" She asked.
"Morning. How are you feeling?" The blue masked turtle asked.
"Ok, I guess." She said low.
"So do you got a name?" He asked.
"Yes. Its Cynthia Kenta. You?" Cynthia answered.
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BubblyShell22
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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2009, 11:09:05 AM »

Good story so far. But I think you should post in regular print instead of with colors It was kind of hard for me to read.
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